chrisG755's audio Reviews on Newgrounds

[Evil Cookies_-_Zombiism]

Good.

This is a nice Song.

You made a gently exciting, and satisfying piece using, syth melody, decent rhythm.
All very good, nice a peaceful, relaxing, maybe suitable for a space Flash game/movie.

However at 0.41 seconds a distorted effect occurred i guess you added thas as an effect? Whatever the reason i did think that it ruined it a bit, the song went from clean and exciting, to annoying, still with a good rhythm just very disappointing.

I also would think it would be nice to add in a louder more predominant beat and add a phaser/flanger effect there just ideas.

Apart from the end i though it was Good.
Keep the Good Work up.

zombiism responds:

Thanks for the tip! I'll try to get rid of the distortion thing, and maybe re-upload a new version of this song. The distortion "Effect" isn't really a effect, its a loop that already had that distortion-like sound.

thanks for the review.
(working on another version right now! :D)

[{when you're around}]

Needs some Work.. But Great!

First off, id like to say this is a really nice piece.

Ignoring other comments i believe that this piece was a joy to listen to.
I enjoyed the beat, tone, melody, and you worked with the rhythm.

It was hard to hear certain sounds they were slightly quiet adding more exciting beats and a bit more of a kick would be nice.
Although i liked the Kick at 1:02, all in all very nice, decent crash at 2:25 and i like the way it all starts there to.

Maybe a bit longer would be nice, so that you could get a bit more of the rhythm, and syth in.

Apart from my ideas about making it more exciting, i really enjoyed this piece for its gently rhythmic changes and exciting transitions, you fitted a lot in.

Very Good.
Keep Submitting you've got Talent!

noobieboobie responds:

Thank you, sir! thank you much.

[Dj Car-addictive Journey(final]

Fab!

Great!

This was really great i love the bubble synthetic beat, the style was awesome and i liked the main melody, very Good rhythm.

Trying to add a more predominant Beat would be nice because its hard to hear this one, also maybe changes the tone a bit more would make it less repetitive although it hardly is.

Apart from that excellent!
Well Done.

bornacar responds:

Im really glad you liked it...tnx for your advices I ll keep that in mind and try to further improve this song.

P.S your rewiew was really inspiring and I thank you for that...wish more people were like u

[SMB3 - Ending Theme[Piano Mix]]

Good

Ignoring badxbad5.

It was really good i could see this working for some Quest game it really was relaxing and , sweat.
Maybe adding a kick or beat would be Good.

Well Done.

[DJ Bossler - Taken]

Tight!!!!

Real tight piece Man!

A real rhythmic loop, the beat was excellent i liked the bubbly tone of the syth and the tonal change.

Adding a few more extras would help, although it is a perfect length, i liked the beginning although it would be nice to have more of a build up.

Keep up the Good Work!

bossler13 responds:

thanks dude! I definitely agree about the build-up. Sadly, I just ran out of time last night to give it a final touch. I'll be working on it soon though.

[Discipulus]

Great

This is a really efficient piece.

You notified all the main bits here, the build up was excellent and the drum beat was real tight.
I do feel that the main song was a let down at 0.45 seconds, there were to many sounds going on and it was hard to define what was going on.

Stretching out notes will be a Better choice and uses Phaser/Flanger/Reverb if you can would help you use notes/samples more efficiently.

Apart from that i enjoyed the Choir although i felt they were over-used at certain bits.

Well Done!

[Revenge(Z)]

hmmm....

First off id like to say Well Done!

You did accomplish making a piece however there are many flaws.
The background Syth Melody was varied and good although it did sound very harsh and clangy a deeper crunchy sound would sound much better.

Its hard to understand whats going on with such a varied piece lengthening out Notes would really help, as its rather rather hard to listen to many sounds going on.

Last of all this song is rather repetitive taking notes away and replacing them when there is nothing to play would be much better than playing everything at
once and running out of ideas.

You showed you can make it varied at 1:58, where you stopped the syth and stayed with the beat.

All in all Good,
Keep up the Hard Work!

Zorlac7K responds:

Okay thank you I'll take that advice

[mctoast - are you ready?]

Generic...but ok...

This was in fact a good piece, you were using Fruity Loops i assume, the sounds were fairly generic and recognizable, not making it that Original.

However the loop went well with the Syth and the Melody went too.
I think the Chunky, Bass beat brought in at 1:49 was Great should have incorporated it into the beginning, and throughout.

Apart from those few corrections it was great, you kept it changing Beat Tone which gave it a textured Beat, also not making it Repetitive.

Add in some extras.

mctoast responds:

thx you very much :D its awesome saw some ppl that knows how the things are. good it this wasnt repeative as i was worried :/ and yea, i would make it alot longer, then that base at 1:49 would continue whole end song, but chance a litle bit rythm and that. well thx :D i do alot extras and that to next project i do.

[Tote]

ok...

This was a hard piece to understand lengthening out the beat making Sure!
it loops properly i dunno whether static, was an effect went well.

The loop ruined it i suggest creating the loop prior to the beat, and then continuing with this piece.

You'll get there.

[The Coming End]

Awesome.

Great Riff true feeling to it, i felt it heading for a bit more of Punk, but you pulled away from that with Truly Dirty Riff.

1:43 you brought in that Piano? which went with the notes was however hard to heard i suggest stretching it out, apply a phased out approach if you can edit it.

Was repetitive as being a Riff, but hardened out towards 3:32, and then came in The solo which really went with the background shredding was true Greatness.

Well Done, Keep it up!

ZzEpiCzZ responds:

1:43 is clean guitar, I put it there because it felt a bit empty. I guess I should have done it the second time too, so that it didn't feel repetitive. Oh well, maybe if I get someone to do vocals it won't be so bad. :D