Wow.
From being used to hearing English Rap this is really weird changing people perceptions of German, but i'm sure i heard them talking about Nazi's.
But yeah thats pretty awesome.
Beat is awesome, Piano is great, and use of the cutting and pasting cuts fro the rap is great!
Keep it up!
Wow!
This was your best song to date, first off i will say the knew things that were knew and whether they worked or not!
Well first that struck me was the tone cahnge in the Intro, it seemed a lot less meaty than the rest of the Song, which was fantastic, its always great to have a more changing Tone.
"I want to leave the paragraph above behind but the fear of dieing is to big"
haha, nah i just mean that was great.
Another thing which i liked was the New Screaming, which yo puled off very well, it fitted which the changing Rhythm and pace of the song and was actually really good.
Well you added plenty of effects to the vocal aspect, which was great, quiet with loud and quiet whispering singing Etc. and yeah this was great.
The Chorus was actually great all transitions in and out of this were Perfect ;)
The Ending was great, this were pretty fast and you ended it pretty quickly which fitted with Tempo of the song.
It also worked well if you were trying to loop it, you would not have to sounds mashed together.
If you want the song to loop again, it doesn't mash up to parts of a song up
My only problem if that you never really continued the song into a pivotal moment, a fast progressing point, there was always, stopping and starting, which although builds tension, and continues with the original plot of the song, it never really gives the feel of the middle part of the song.
All i can say is that this was definitely your best work, giving out all the right ideas, and all working well to create a legendary piece of Metal!
Keep up the Good Work!
-Chris
your loyal fan :P
yet again thanks chris ;)
and you're indeed right about the stopping and starting. it somhow lacks a continuing feeling. if maybe I put a direct leap from the speedy part to the "I'm suicidal" part, and made the second chorous repeat once more. I think it could improove it. :)
I will look at it :)
Cool
Great Track!
his is also used by ViralofAME
Where you get these tracks from?
from Shadowville beats
Hmm... YES!
Wow cyber77 is harsh, i think that his review was pretty harsh, i found this song to be fine, it fitted the aspect you were looking for.
I'm not trying to say that I'm listening to this because it makes me feel happy, or to great, but i do find that if you were to need some evil existence track then yes this would be perfect!
How is this meant to sound Cyber77?
haha
I got the main idea, the lyrics brilliant, this made me feel like rebelling shouting, anger hate, something that i like about Metal, especially like this.
2:24 reminded me of Slipknot, but no different to many bands, i can see this being a top record for people who enjoy this Death Metalcore.
Guitar in-fact was excellent few nice licks and rhythms also drums were exciting varied added a nice affect.
And then you get to the part that sums this up as excellent as Vocal Aspect brilliant!
Keep it up!
thanks chris!
I was kind of getting worried if I was doing the wrong thing here.
though I might agree that it doesn't sound very good with the tube-ish sound my mixer makes, but maybe one day (lol) I will re-record the vocals without it. and mabe turn the bass volume a notch down.
great and detailed review by the way. ;)
I will upload a new track in the near future.
and "Destructive Detour"'s next track is coming along. ;)
Wow!
This was amazing it just shows how good the original melody was, great!
Keep it up!
Yo man.
Tight shite hear, im down for your rapping!.
Keep it up man!
p.s, maybe do sum collabin lol lol..
Mixcraft..
This is Mixcraft not your own Work.. Douche!
Awesome!
This Rocks Izack, you guys keep dropping awesome shite, you can relate to most of your songs, and their just awesome!
Keep It UP!
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