Great.
This was a Change compared to lots of Metal i hear in the Audio Portal,
Although it was pleasantly surprising it was really Good.
I thought the beginning was really Great, use of build up was awesome, it was layered and exciting.
The Drums was also Great you kept this Piece away from the Flatish boring drums, that can be easily included.
The singing was Great, you included it to be Harsh, At times it was Hard at times to hear turning the Vocal aspect up would be a Good idea.
Lyrics were Good, they fitted Very Well.
Also at 1:16 there was a feeling of static, it sounded as if your Mic wasn't holding up got fairly Distorted which was a bit of an Issue.
You used a Deeper Backing Vocal which added a nice harsh feeling, and when done in unison was Great!
Lastly the Ending was Good, the Distorted sound grew louder there which was a bit disappointing although you kept the Ending very well, Leaving you to listen to it again lol.
All in All this was Great!
Keep up the Great Work!