chrisG755's audio Reviews on Newgrounds

[Sky wave.]

Great.

This was a Sweet Piece Influential, Relaxing a Exciting, you kept to a always moving beat syth, and a nice Beat.

Including the Beautiful Piano, I do feel as if the beginning build-up went on for to long, Id have liked to have had a longer exciting Melody during the begining, the

Ending was Great, Maybe Looping continually for a bit longer to leave time for
more of a Subtle Fade, although it would not Loop quite so well.

Back to the Beginning.
I felt that the Abrupt change the Different toned syth was fairly Good, although maybe a bit to Clashed a bit with the Main Piano Melody, although you kept a steady Piano Melody and sweet Beat throughout the Transition.

5/5 9/10

Hopefully some or All of that was Helpful.
On a last Note, Good Luck, Well Done and Keep it Up!

ShinyArmor responds:

Thanks alt, i see what your saying with the beginning, i could change it up a bit, but i dont really wanna. . .
i feel like its good enough as it is and whateverand i dont wanna mees it up by trying too hard

Thanks alot for you review. . .

[J2A [Demo]]

Awesome

This for a start had an excellent build up, and beginning trueTrance style your beat was nice high and clean it work well with the bubble quieter syth.
Then the main syth was good nice melody you kept a good beat throughout the piece.
Try to use more predominant beats, and change the tone and syth more.

Apart from that Great!

Zenan responds:

Yeah, I'm going to sort out the bass!
Thanks! :)

[Tribe of the Stream]

Hostile!

Awesome!

It conjures up a sacrifice in the wilderness of a aboriginal Tribe, which is what its meant to be lol, nothing gets past me.. hehe

Well i think this is great your background sounds go well, add decent effect to the plot, and don't get in the way of the main drum beat.

The drum beat was awesome, with the background syth? which i though was good, and a horn type instrument reminds me of a digeredo lol.
Shakers were nice a bit like a rattle snake.

It was quite short which was slightly annoying although it loops quite nicely.

All in All
Really Good!

Lalalo14 responds:

haha, yeah I know it came out a little short :P
Thanks for the review! :D

[TES 3 Morrowind]

Excellent

Such Beautiful music!
I forgot about this soundtrack.

However is it me or does the music stop at 1:01 minutes?
Which is really disappointing as it was going so well... Do you have an explanation for this?
If so you should just cut down the track to the length you play in it.

Oh Well.. the music itself was very nice, gentle, exciting, smooth you obviously are very talented.
I hope to hear more of your covers, or maybe even a composition!

All in All Very Good..
try to fix those problems.

Telfyr responds:

thank you very much

i finally found a free mp3 splitter >.> problem was with Reason it sometimes adds aload of silence to the end of the piece and i couldn't find a splitter anywhere that didn't cost about £25 >.>

but its all resolved now ^^

[Prayer for a new god]

Generic..

I very Generic piece.

I have used this program before Mixcraft is very easy to use simple, but Great!
I have to Admire you for your brilliant compiling you really captured this Metal well, much better than i did on my first go.

Voice you used was Good.
You used the General Organ well it fitted at a Metal piece very Well.

Also the end was nice slowing down, Beginning was great, fading in with Guitar really went well.
No real Faults maybe stretching out guitar loops it was sometimes hard to hear everything.

Nice Compiling.
Well Done!

Telfyr responds:

thankyou very much for the feedback, i do have to agree, it is a very generic piece of music, i made this as more of an experiment, just seeing what the programs could do.

[Frapps Forest]

Exciting

Real Enjoyable piece.

This was a obviously short peace but you captured the unknown aspect of a Wilderness.
i could see this working in a Adventure Flash.
Maybe it would be nice to make it a bit longer or maybe adapting it to completely loop from one end to the other.

All in All Nice!

kingkilla37 responds:

Thanks a lot for the advice - any other ideas on how I could add to the loop after the (current) ending and still keep the mystery and excitement in the piece?

Also, sorry about the break at the end, this occurred when I converted the WAV I had into .mp3 format, and none of my (free) editing programs will save as a .mp3 so I am still searching for a way to fix this looping issue.

Thanks again for your input.

[Evil Cookies_-_Zombiism]

Good.

This is a nice Song.

You made a gently exciting, and satisfying piece using, syth melody, decent rhythm.
All very good, nice a peaceful, relaxing, maybe suitable for a space Flash game/movie.

However at 0.41 seconds a distorted effect occurred i guess you added thas as an effect? Whatever the reason i did think that it ruined it a bit, the song went from clean and exciting, to annoying, still with a good rhythm just very disappointing.

I also would think it would be nice to add in a louder more predominant beat and add a phaser/flanger effect there just ideas.

Apart from the end i though it was Good.
Keep the Good Work up.

zombiism responds:

Thanks for the tip! I'll try to get rid of the distortion thing, and maybe re-upload a new version of this song. The distortion "Effect" isn't really a effect, its a loop that already had that distortion-like sound.

thanks for the review.
(working on another version right now! :D)

[{when you're around}]

Needs some Work.. But Great!

First off, id like to say this is a really nice piece.

Ignoring other comments i believe that this piece was a joy to listen to.
I enjoyed the beat, tone, melody, and you worked with the rhythm.

It was hard to hear certain sounds they were slightly quiet adding more exciting beats and a bit more of a kick would be nice.
Although i liked the Kick at 1:02, all in all very nice, decent crash at 2:25 and i like the way it all starts there to.

Maybe a bit longer would be nice, so that you could get a bit more of the rhythm, and syth in.

Apart from my ideas about making it more exciting, i really enjoyed this piece for its gently rhythmic changes and exciting transitions, you fitted a lot in.

Very Good.
Keep Submitting you've got Talent!

noobieboobie responds:

Thank you, sir! thank you much.

[Dj Car-addictive Journey(final]

Fab!

Great!

This was really great i love the bubble synthetic beat, the style was awesome and i liked the main melody, very Good rhythm.

Trying to add a more predominant Beat would be nice because its hard to hear this one, also maybe changes the tone a bit more would make it less repetitive although it hardly is.

Apart from that excellent!
Well Done.

bornacar responds:

Im really glad you liked it...tnx for your advices I ll keep that in mind and try to further improve this song.

P.S your rewiew was really inspiring and I thank you for that...wish more people were like u

[DJ Bossler - Taken]

Tight!!!!

Real tight piece Man!

A real rhythmic loop, the beat was excellent i liked the bubbly tone of the syth and the tonal change.

Adding a few more extras would help, although it is a perfect length, i liked the beginning although it would be nice to have more of a build up.

Keep up the Good Work!

bossler13 responds:

thanks dude! I definitely agree about the build-up. Sadly, I just ran out of time last night to give it a final touch. I'll be working on it soon though.