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hmmm....

First off id like to say Well Done!

You did accomplish making a piece however there are many flaws.
The background Syth Melody was varied and good although it did sound very harsh and clangy a deeper crunchy sound would sound much better.

Its hard to understand whats going on with such a varied piece lengthening out Notes would really help, as its rather rather hard to listen to many sounds going on.

Last of all this song is rather repetitive taking notes away and replacing them when there is nothing to play would be much better than playing everything at
once and running out of ideas.

You showed you can make it varied at 1:58, where you stopped the syth and stayed with the beat.

All in all Good,
Keep up the Hard Work!

Zorlac7K responds:

Okay thank you I'll take that advice

Generic...but ok...

This was in fact a good piece, you were using Fruity Loops i assume, the sounds were fairly generic and recognizable, not making it that Original.

However the loop went well with the Syth and the Melody went too.
I think the Chunky, Bass beat brought in at 1:49 was Great should have incorporated it into the beginning, and throughout.

Apart from those few corrections it was great, you kept it changing Beat Tone which gave it a textured Beat, also not making it Repetitive.

Add in some extras.

mctoast responds:

thx you very much :D its awesome saw some ppl that knows how the things are. good it this wasnt repeative as i was worried :/ and yea, i would make it alot longer, then that base at 1:49 would continue whole end song, but chance a litle bit rythm and that. well thx :D i do alot extras and that to next project i do.

Awesome.

Great Riff true feeling to it, i felt it heading for a bit more of Punk, but you pulled away from that with Truly Dirty Riff.

1:43 you brought in that Piano? which went with the notes was however hard to heard i suggest stretching it out, apply a phased out approach if you can edit it.

Was repetitive as being a Riff, but hardened out towards 3:32, and then came in The solo which really went with the background shredding was true Greatness.

Well Done, Keep it up!

ZzEpiCzZ responds:

1:43 is clean guitar, I put it there because it felt a bit empty. I guess I should have done it the second time too, so that it didn't feel repetitive. Oh well, maybe if I get someone to do vocals it won't be so bad. :D

cool

well done very good

Lalalo14 responds:

Thanks! :)

Great

Awesome syth beat melody and the timing was perfect the kicks emphasized the whole thing a joy to listen to i decent to favorite it.
Truly great, Maybe a little longer to increase excitement and also some less looping also crash and the end is very generic.

Apart from that Fantastic!

Dj-Rayn responds:

Thanks for that man. This is only my third song made from FL Studios 8. I hope to improve and become better. {dj-Nate} inspired me man... haha

Fast exciting!

And very Good its a great loop that fits perfectly when on loop you can really keep listening forever and it fits perfectly!
Cant wait to see if you make this into a real sng maybe some chase, Really Great!

Keep it up/Make more!

BlackVen0m responds:

Thanks man, Never really made much for the Techno genre but this can be a start to a whole new thing. I only spent about 10 - 20 minutes on this loop alone so I am considering making a whole song out of it. But thanks again. :)

Gothic toch

more like a quick tom beat, anyway very good well done

Conal responds:

:^)

lol

this is a very good and the chorus is actually really good i almost sang along lol

Conal responds:

Seriously? Cheers!

Well going from a zereo to 7 is Good!

well, even though this is just a loop with different pitch it is quite good and probably quite usful in Drum n Bass or Techno music.

Sooo.. Well done!

Conal responds:

D

What is the world coming to!

Piece of crap,

go get a life!

Conal responds:

STFU or be more helpful.

I'm just a kid who has a passion for music.. but hey what'do i know?

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