hmmm....
First off id like to say Well Done!
You did accomplish making a piece however there are many flaws.
The background Syth Melody was varied and good although it did sound very harsh and clangy a deeper crunchy sound would sound much better.
Its hard to understand whats going on with such a varied piece lengthening out Notes would really help, as its rather rather hard to listen to many sounds going on.
Last of all this song is rather repetitive taking notes away and replacing them when there is nothing to play would be much better than playing everything at
once and running out of ideas.
You showed you can make it varied at 1:58, where you stopped the syth and stayed with the beat.
All in all Good,
Keep up the Hard Work!